Analysis of THE QUICKENING

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



The quickening goes soaring far
Through dark alleyways by night,
Searching wide for human prey
Vanishing again by first light.

The quickening flees through sewer ways
In daylight where it e’er doth hide,
Then through the alleyways, it roars
At night, to steal another life.

A darkened shadow is slowly seeping
Like acid spilling from a jar,
Hunting through the land by night
Seeking victims near and far.

It’s hunting wide for human prey
For its hunger must be sated,
By feeding upon the lonely folk
Whose lives it seems are e’er fated.

Fated to be the living food
Of a shadow from out of time and space,
A darkening that’s as cold as death
And sensing humans doth give chase.

Yet even as the fiend descends
No-one really dares believe,
The quickening from tormented dreams
Could somehow be truly real.

So through the night, a shadow creeps
Devouring hobos in a park,
Or lowly, homeless vagabonds
It finds out walking through the dark.

A legend from forgotten times
When nightmares stalked upon the Earth,
And knights of yore set out to fight
And often die to prove their worth.

The quickening shows no remorse
As through the night it hunts and kills,
Without emotion, it doth devour
The souls of people whose lives it stills.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABCB XXXX XABA CDXD XEXE XXXX XFXF XGBG XHXH XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01001101 111011 1011101 10001111 010011101 0111111 1101011 11110101 010111010 11010101 1010111 1010101 11011101 11101110 110010101 11111110 10110101 101111101 010011111 01010111 11010101 1110101 01001101 111101 1101011 01001001 11010100 11110101 01010101 1110101 01111111 01011111 01001101 11011101 0101011010 011101111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,268
Words 226
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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The quickening goes soaring far Through dark alleyways by night, Searching wide for human prey Vanishing again by first light.

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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