Analysis of NIGHT DEMONS



Night demons slinking
Through the dark and horrid night,
Night creatures closing in
In a seamy, torrid night.

Foul beasts descending
Upon their sleeping prey,
As dreams turn into nightmares
As the fear the end of day.

Night demons calling
In a voice to chill the marrow,
Terror running down your spine
Wide eyes begin to narrow.

Yellow eyes are staring
From a corner of the room,
Monstrous snickers ring out
From within an evil gloom.

Slinking, hopping, slithering
Is heard from in the darkness,
Malignant fiends are crawling
Round the beds of those at rest.

Noxious fiends slither
Like awful giant snails,
Around a sleeping victim’s head
They leave horrid slimy trails.

Night demons yowling
With a noise to scare the dead,
Night victims quivering
Too afraid when all is said:

Too afraid to go to sleep
As night visitors mumble,
In breathless monstrous voices
As around the room, the dead stumbles.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB ACXC ADXD AEXE AXAX XFGF AGAG XXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1010101 110100 0010101 11010 011101 111011 1010111 11010 00111010 1010111 1101110 101110 1010101 101011 1011101 110100 1110010 0101110 1011111 10110 110101 01010101 1110101 1101 1011101 110100 1011111 1011111 1110010 0101010 101010110 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 938
Words 163
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Horror poem about monstrous fiends that creep in the night.

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Written on July 24, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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