Analysis of a sunny nightmare



i thought that my light might guide you somewhere new, or that  perhaps i  could join you in your sunny fields. for basking in your sunshine felt better than anywhere else. i quickly realized you manufactured this world,  and I was instead left to pick up the pieces of a fantasy world not yet created. I spent all my magic keeping your world real, but when i drew back, i realized it was not just mine there mingling to keep the grass green. It had always been your world, and you to frolick bringing along new creatures to enjoy a world untouched by darkness.


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Characters 561
Words 104
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 445
Words per line (avg) 107
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Submitted by stephanieb.86677 on June 24, 2021

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