Analysis of A Salute to my Moon.



I felt a state of loneliness,
Lying alone on the roof,
Looking at stars twinkle,
All together, giving message,
For being with me,
The full moon shining,
Between the stars,
Illuminating your memories,
Filtering through the moonlight,
Comes into the mirror,
Of my open poor heart,
Your pictures are coming down,
Padding me one after the other,
From silent strings of stars,
Give her my love message,
'O' The Moon and the Stars,
Give her my big salute..............


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011100 1001101 101110 10101010 11011 01110 0101 01001100 100101 101010 111011 1101101 101110010 110111 101110 101001 101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 446
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 352
Words per stanza (avg) 78

About this poem

In this poem the expression is that when a couple is away from each other for a little long what feel comes in between both.

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Submitted by brijmohan_p on June 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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