Analysis of Decisions

Corina H. Ramirez 1964 (San Angelo)



I'm glad you open my eyes
and help me to realize,
that where I was heading
was the wrong way.

There is a price to pay
for every decision we make,
so choose your actions wisely
and the road you may take.

When you feel lost and lonely
Jesus is the only way,
He will never fail you
so remember to always pray.

It's sad when we are young
we don't think about God,
we think we have it all
for God is our Rock.


Scheme AAXB BCDC DBXB XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111011 011110 111110 1011 110111 110001011 1111010 001111 1111010 1010101 111011 1010111 111111 111011 111111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 389
Words 85
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on August 07, 2021

Submitted by corina_h on June 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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