Analysis of THE GREAT ESCAPE
After eight years plus in Hell
Living with the fool on the hill,
Heeding Doctor Molongue who said
“The fool has the right to kill.”
So on that night in ‘76
His clan made a desperate break,
And fled away from Hannan Street
As they made the great escape.
They sorted out their business
And started preparing for a move,
Though ‘fraid the fool would find out
They had nothing much to lose.
So Bokky, Flongo, and Niecey-Bonks
Spent a worried, tiring day,
And had to carry Dorothy out
As they made the great escape.
A tyrant name of Muggsly
Aka the fool on the kill,
Bullied, raped, and beat them
Then started threatening to kill.
With succour nowhere at hand
They had to save themselves,
Because a crazy cuckoo said
“We cannot give you help!”
So on advice from the sage doctor
They packed up and carted away,
Until at last, they started off
As they made the great escape.
Jock brought round his yellow van
To pack away their gear,
Until they fled that awful place
Where all they’d known was fear.
With Shezzy, Lois, and Huey
Pitching in to save the day,
Desperate to finish up in time
As they made the great escape.
Flongo in his red Safari coat
Drove his white shaggin' waggon,
As they hurried to pack up their life
Desperate to soon be gone.
And before the dreaded Muggsly
Could force them all to stay,
The caravan headed off for Yarraville
As they made the great escape.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | abcb dxxE fxgx fhgE abxb xxcx xhxE xixi xhxE xdxx ahaE xxx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011101 10101101 1010111 0110111 11110 1110101 01011101 1110101 1101110 010010101 1101111 1110111 111011 1010101 011101001 1110101 010111 1001101 101011 11010011 11111 111101 0101011 110111 110110110 11101001 01111101 1110101 1111101 110111 01111101 111111 1110010 1001101 10110101 1110101 10110101 11111 111011111 101111 0010101 111111 01010111 1110101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,410 |
Words | 266 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 47 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 95 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
One of four linked poems about my father's madness. The other three are: Witchery, 20 Years in Hell, and The Story of Hell House. The correct order of the four is: 20 Years in Hell, The Story of Hell House, The Great Escape, and Witchery.
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Written on August 15, 2009
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 30, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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