Analysis of NEGATIVE ACTION

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Promoting women ahead of men
Negative action sets the rules,
So men can never get employed
Just to cosset sexist fools.

They slandered one-hundred and sixty-six
For campaigning for equality,
"No!   Women must be put first!"
Said those with no morality.

So negative action carries on
Especially when Labor is in power,
So as much as Lib-Nat's aren't much better
A Labor government's our darkest hour.

Equality should be the goal
For every federal government,
But now with Big Sister watching over
Equality is dead and spent.

"No more jobs for girls!"
Should be our battle cry,
As we stand up for democracy
Before freedom can truly die.

It's promotions based on cleavage
Not upon the skill at hand,
No decent person thinks it's right
Still, injustice swamps this land.

So girls no longer even try
They've become the bludger gender,
They know they'll always get employed
Ahead of more skilled contenders.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XABA XCXC XDDD XXDX XECE XFXF EDBX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010100111 10010101 11110101 1110101 1101100101 101010100 1101111 11110100 110010101 0101101010 11111110110 010100101010 01001101 1100100100 1111101010 01001101 11111 1110101 111110100 01101101 10101110 1010111 11010111 1010111 11110101 1010110 1111101 01111010 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 964
Words 166
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Promoting women ahead of men Negative action sets the rules,

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Written on June 30, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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