Analysis of THE LOST



An old man freezing in the night
Unable to meet the power cost,
Pondering at the trials of life
A member of the lost.

The lost are people left behind
On whom life begins to take a toll,
No longer daring to aim high
Just staying alive their only goal.

The lost may wonder at life’s shortfalls
But no longer fight for a fairer life,
They’re beaten down and raped by fate
They’re merely struggling to survive.

An old man in the endless night
Freezing through unto the bone,
Arthritis wracks his aching frame
He struggles on upon his own.

A man whom fate did overlook
No wife or children of his own,
No loved ones ‘cept his two old cats
To help to make his house a home.

The lost are people without a life
People who just merely exist,
For whom trying has become too hard
And so they merely subsist.

People who have failed at life
For life owes them no living.
The people who once dared to hope
Until life forced them to give in.

The lost may wonder all alone
Forced to freeze on Melbourne’s streets,
Wary of the struggles of life
Afraid of anyone they meet.

For fate has treated them badly
By life they have been raped,
Until the end brings sweet solitude
At last release in death’s embrace.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXBX XCXC XBXX ADXD XDXX BEXE BXXX DXBX XXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110001 010110101 100101011 010101 01110101 111011101 11010111 110011101 01110111 1110110101 11010111 110100101 11100101 1011001 01011101 11010111 0111110 11110111 11111111 11111101 011100101 10111001 111010111 0111001 1011111 1111110 01011111 01111110 01110101 111111 10101011 0111011 11110110 111111 01011110 11010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,235
Words 236
Sentences 11
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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An old man freezing in the night Unable to meet the power cost, Pondering at the trials of life A member of the lost.

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Written on April 27, 2009

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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