Analysis of THE NIGHT INVASION



Black shadows quickening
Across the barren lawn,
Dark shadows thickening
The night terror was born.

Dark figures creeping
Toward an unlit terrace,
Horror slowly seeping
Across a victim’s face.

Night visions calling
In a nightmare sound,
All hope is falling
As the sun goes surely down.

Strange creatures loping
Toward their sleeping prey,
Frightened victims hoping
Just to live till the light of day.

Night beasts are howling
Shrieking dire cries of lust,
Dreadful nightmare yowling
Beginning with the dusk.

Footsteps are slinking
Around a room at night,
Victims are blinking
Like rabbits in headlights.

Awful creatures peer
Out from nightmare places,
Evil things bring icy fear
With coarse primordial faces.

Out of the murky reaches
Of a dark and musty room,
Slink fearful shadowy creatures
Bringing only doom.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXAX AXAX AXAX ABAB AXAX AXAX CDCD DEXE XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 11100 010101 11100 011011 11010 011110 101010 010101 11010 0011 11110 1011101 1101 011101 101010 11110111 11110 101111 1011 010101 111 010111 10110 11001 10101 11110 1011101 11010010 1101010 1010101 11010010 10101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 851
Words 139
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Horror poem about dreadful creatures that invade people's houses at night.

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Written on July 20, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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