Analysis of THE HORRID STREETS
I walk upon the horrid streets
And I must feel forlorn,
My hopes, my dreams have flown away
As though they’d never been born.
I live upon the Western streets
And receive abuse and scorn,
From foul-mouthed swine and harridans
All my promises are long gone.
The torrid streets are killing me
And all those milling around,
Our dreams of moving on have died
So now we’re moving down.
We’re moving down to Barkly Street
Where only losers move,
We’re facing evil lies and scorn
Slander and foul abuse.
I’m living in the torrid streets
Now all my hopes have died,
I walk upon the concrete streets
Just hoping to survive.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | ABXB ABAX XXCX XXBX ACAX XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010101 011101 11111101 1111011 11010101 0010101 111101 11100111 01011101 0111001 101110111 110101 0101111 110101 01010101 100101 11000101 111111 11010011 110101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 674 |
Words | 121 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
About this poem
Footscray used to be a great place to live. But the Hoon (hooligan) element has now taken over.
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Written on July 07, 2008
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 13, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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