Analysis of THE TERRIBLE NIGHT
The lonely walk in terror
Out late in Paisley Street,
Afraid of all the reprobates
Winos, druggies, freaks.
The street folk of Footscray
Have learnt to live with fear,
Of winos, druggies, muggers
Starvation ever rears.
The down-trodden live in freight cars
Rusted out in sidings,
In packing crates and boxes
In fear and cold, they’re hiding.
The forgotten sleep on benches
Deep in Footscray Park,
Away from sight and thought
Lost souls in the dark.
We say we’d like to help them
But we just don’t care enough,
So they starve and die of cold
Street folk living rough.
We’d really like to help the poor
But in truth, we just don’t care,
We’d like to have compassion but
Compassion is now so rare.
So let the poor help themselves
Because God helps though who do,
Why should the rich pay any tax
When the rich were born to rule!
To hell with largesse oblige
We’re not obliged to carry our weight,
So if the poor folk starve and die
We know that it’s just their fate!
They’re fated to die without our help
And so they’ll just have to die,
We’re obscenely rich as we mean to stay
So let the poor eat humble pie!
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | AXBB AXBB BBBX BCXC XDXD XEXE BXBX XFGF XGXG XBX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101010 110101 011101 1011 01111 111111 110110 010101 01101011 10101 0101010 0101110 00101110 1011 011101 11001 1111111 1111101 1110111 11101 11011101 1011111 11110101 0101111 1101101 0111111 11011101 1010111 1110101 0101110101 11011101 1111111 1101101101 0111111 00100111111 11011101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,162 |
Words | 217 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 92 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
Another of my poems about the downtrodden and street people.
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Written on June 16, 2008
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 16, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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