Analysis of THE STORMS OF LIFE



In a year where everything goes badly wrong
A poor man prays for just one thing to go right,
As all the world seems surely set against him
He struggles to survive the storms of life.

For nothing seems to work this awful year
And nothing seems to go his way at all,
For if he is not ill with chest infections
He’s all but crippled by a ghastly fall.

And, as his injuries and ailments mount
He struggles just to live from day to day,
Though suicide’s a sin as Jesus tells us
He wonders if he’d be better off in the grave.

Though life was never meant to be easy
Still, he wonders why it has to be this hard,
He rarely even dares to step outside now
And finds himself constantly on guard.

On guard against the terrors he encounters
Against the many tragedies that beset him,
He wonders why he always seems to lose out
And wonders if he’ll ever get to win.

The storms of life blow so hard against him
And even daytime seems as black as night,
He wonders if he’ll always stay in poverty
Or if sometime soon he’ll have a better life.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XABC XDXD XXXX EFXF XBXX BAEC XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0011101101 01111111111 11011101011 1101010111 1101111101 0101111111 11111111010 1111010101 0111000101 1101111111 1100111011 110111101001 1111011110 11101111111 11010111111 010110011 11010101010 010101001011 1101111111 0101110111 0111111011 010111111 11011110100 1111110101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,085
Words 211
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 30

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In a year where everything goes badly wrong A poor man prays for just one thing to go right, As all the world seems surely set against him He struggles to survive the storms of life.

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Written on September 07, 2008

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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