Analysis of While I sit and look

Yogita Yamini 1975 (Patna)



While I sit and look beyond,
To the furure that I can bond,
Sitting near the shore of  pond,
Pondering and wondering ,
Of what it holds,
Happiness and sorrows manifolds...

While I sit and look at years gone
I sometimes feel so withdrawn,
While it went by very fast,
With happiness have felt many scars,
They seem distant and very far,
Have raised my bar,
And crossed it like rockstar..

While I sit and look today..
So much is happening around,
Though it's a phase never thought off,
Yet we are trying to pull it off,
And doing that with all the grace
That's the beauty of human race...


Scheme AAAXBB CCXXDDD XXEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1011111 1010111 1000100 1111 1000101 11101111 1011101 1111101 110011101 11100101 1111 01111 1110101 11110001 11011011 111101111 01011101 10101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 567
Words 109
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

Based on my life experience

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Written on July 17, 2021

Submitted by yogitayamini on July 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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