Analysis of WHY DO LITTLE BABIES CRY?



Why do little babies cry
As their fathers go off to die?
In this time of pain and hate
Why can't evil e'er be sate?

Why must all the good men die
As lonely women e'er cry!
Why can't haters just forgive
So the fathers all can live?

Why must little babies grieve
As off to war their fathers leave?
When only human monsters rule
Why must the leaders be so cruel?

Can the killing never end
Is this the message we must send,
To all the future generations
As we murder other nations?

Can there never be repentance?
As good people all pass sentence?
Finding all the rulers mad
When goodness all has turned to bad!

Why do little babies cry
As their fathers march off to die?

THE END
© Copyright 2016, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Aabb aaxx ccxx ddee ffgg Aa dxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1110101 11101111 0111101 11101011 1110111 11010101 1110101 1010111 1110101 11111101 11010101 110101110 1010101 11010111 11010010 11101010 11101010 11101110 1010101 11011111 1110101 11101111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 717
Words 139
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 3
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Not sure if this counts as a poem, or as a song lyric. Either way, it is anti-war

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Written on May 06, 2016

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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