Analysis of Unending pain.
Devasish Malla. 1999 (Nepal)
No matter how much I try I feel the same.
For this cause cause I have no one to blame.
Maybe I was born to be insane.
Oh if only you could feel my pain.
It feels like I am tied down in a chain.
Everything has freedom except my brain.
Oh everyday in my life there is nothing but rain.
All my peace is slowly poured down in the drain.
I can only feel pain in every single vain.
No matter how much I train.
I guess this mind will never be sane.
| Scheme | AABBBBBBBBB |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11011111101 1111111111 101111101 111011111 1111111001 101100111 1101011111011 11111011001 1110110100101 1101111 111111011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 431 |
| Words | 94 |
| Sentences | 11 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 11 |
| Lines Amount | 11 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 337 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 94 |
About this poem
When no matter how much you try to change and nothing happens you feel frustrated with yourself. This is how I am feeling now.
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Written on August 15, 1999
Submitted by devasishmalla1010 on July 21, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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