Analysis of LAND OF BROKEN PROMISES



In the land of broken promises
Hope is rarely ever fulfilled,
Nothing seems to go your way
Until you've had your fill.

Your fill of broken promises
Your fill of an empty life,
A life without any children
Without a husband, or a wife.

A family is out of reach
In the awful, broken land,
Where lonesome losers dwell
Forced to camp in desert sands.

Red sands burning the flesh
Of those forced to live outside,
Unless they live in packing crates
Or more luckily have died.

Empty people live here
In this unbearable place,
Where no-one ever comes by choice
And no-one ever wants to stay.

Horror fills the lives
Of most who come down here,
A horror that they'll never leave
A creeping, frigid fear.

Fear you'll spend your life here
And that you never will escape,
From this living Hell on Earth
This fouls and morbid landscape.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXBX ACXC XXXX XDXD EXXB XEXX EFXF XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 001110100 11101001 1011111 011111 11110100 1111101 01011010 01010101 01001111 0010101 110101 1110101 111001 1111111 01110101 1110011 101011 0101001 11110111 01110111 10101 111111 01011101 010101 111111 01110101 1110111 110101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 864
Words 160
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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In the land of broken promises Hope is rarely ever fulfilled, Nothing seems to go your way Until you've had your fill.

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Written on July 14, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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