Analysis of TANKA VERSES #002
THE DEAD CENTRE OF AUSTRALIA
One week of the year
Adelaide once came alive,
Now the place is dead.
Nothing ever happens there
Fifty-two weeks of the year.
THE BUSH ERROR
After seven long
Years, of George Bush’s terrorism,
I cannot believe
That anyone would ever think,
Of voting Republican.
THE MAN-GIRLS FROM BEIJING
Bulging mannish thighs
And arms as thick as tree trunks:
Beijing’s mannish girls;
These steroid queens are soiling
The once pure sport of swimming.
MANNISH GIRLS
Beijing’s mannish girls
With shoulders broad as mountains,
Voices deep as a man’s;
They claim they are not cheaters,
These mannish girls from Beijing.
HORROR FROM THE DEEPS
Horror from the deeps
Beasts from some watery world,
Dreamt of by no man
Come visiting the seashore,
Dragging swimmers to their doom.
THE LURKERS WITHIN
Midnight breezes howling
Sound like unseen carnivores,
Nervous people hide
From unseen dangers without,
Blind that danger lurks within.
PREDATORS STALKING
The odour of death
Wafting along in the breeze,
Predators stalking
Through the moonlight, waiting for
Unsuspecting passers-by.
WARNINGS OF MADNESS (08/07/2021)
Warnings of madness
Evil manifestations
Overwhelming your senses,
Cries of agony
Unseen horrors lurch your way.
WET MUSIC
Insane musician
Playing his wet music on,
Human intestines;
A knife-blade his only bow
To play screaming instruments.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | abxxxb xcxxxd efxGce gGhxxe FFxxix jexxxj ExxEix kkhxxx xdxhxx xxa |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01101010 11101 101101 10111 1010101 1011101 0110 10101 1111100 11001 1101101 1100100 01111 1011 0111111 111 101111 0111110 11 111 1101110 101101 1111110 11111 10101 10101 1111001 11111 110001 1010111 0101 11010 110110 10101 1011001 1110101 10010 0111 1001001 10010 101101 010101 10110 10110 100010 010110 11100 0110111 110 01010 1011101 10010 0111101 1110100 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,423 |
Words | 225 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 3 |
Lines Amount | 57 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 117 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
A number of tanka (or Tankya) verses I have written over the years.
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Written on March 03, 2009
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 24, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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