Analysis of THE STATE OF DESPAIR



Since late ‘92 Victoria has been
Australia’s state of despair;
All our dreams of happiness
Have vanished into thin air.
We used to dream of liberty
But now there’s nothing there;
We used to have a good life
Now living is hard to bear.

Since October 1992
Jerky Jeff’s been on the rampage;
He has become a bumbling clown
On Australia’s most tragic stage.
Like a bull in Australia’s China shop
He’s destructive in his rage;
He’s made us feel like animals
Locked up in Victoria’s cage.

Since Jeff Kennett came to power
There has been a great migration;
One hundred each day leave Victoria
For other parts of the nation.
To Queensland or New South Wales now
Victorians go to seek salvation;
Our hopes and dreams have felt the knife
Victims of Kennett’s castration.

Each day more rights are taken
Away by this mad buffoon;
The state has been blown apart
By this most evil of typhoons.
We used to be so confident
But now we sing another tune;
We hope to see Labor back in power
And we hope it’s very soon.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXAXABA CDXDXDXD CEFEXEBE EGXXXGCG XXF
Poetic Form
Metre 11010011 11101 11011100 1100111 11111100 111101 1111011 1101111 1010 1011101 110101001 111101 10101101 1010011 11111100 11001001 11101110 11101010 1101110100 11011010 1111111 0100111010 101011101 101110 1111110 0111101 0111101 1111011 11111100 11110101 1111101010 0111101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,058
Words 194
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

Another poem about the totalitarian rule of fascist Victorian Premier Jeff Kennett. Note, I no longer support the A.L.P.

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Written on 1997

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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