Analysis of Your daily struggle
Your daily struggle
As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain
I watch you with every breath you take
Always to make certain your still breathing
Hopefully you wake up to see the daybreak
It hurts me to see you struggle
The stress has never been so real
and it has now caused such a headache
I pray everyday that the angels let you stay
Speak high above see down below
My mind is in disarray
I try to keep my emotions from getting out of control
But when I see you struggle
It takes its toll
As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain
Soon I know the angels will take you
And my heart will break
As I write these words the tears fall down my face
Soon you won’t wake up to see the daybreak
The angels have come
And now it’s time to say our goodbyes
Everything has become numb
I can now say she has met her demise
As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain
© 4 minutes ago heartache-family • rhyme
Scheme | a ABBCB dxdaxd exefaf ABBCB xdxd ghgh ABBCB x |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 1111100111 111101110 1001111101 11111110 01110111 01111101 111011010111 11011101 111001 111110101101101 1111110 1111 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 111010111 01111 11111011111 111111101 01011 011111101 101011 1111111001 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 100111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,312 |
Words | 262 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 5, 6, 6, 5, 4, 4, 5, 1 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 118 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Written on July 31, 2021
Submitted by Mward402021 on July 31, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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