Analysis of Your daily struggle



Your daily struggle

As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain

I watch you with every breath you take
Always to make certain your still breathing
Hopefully you wake up to see the daybreak
It hurts me to see you struggle
The stress has never been so real
and it has now caused such a headache

I pray everyday that the angels let you stay
Speak high above see down below
My mind is in disarray
I try to keep my emotions from getting out of control
But when I see you struggle
It takes its toll

As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain

Soon I know the angels will take you
And my heart will break
As I write these words the tears fall down my face
Soon you won’t wake up to see the daybreak

The angels have come
And now it’s time to say our goodbyes
Everything has become numb
I can now say she has met her demise

As I sit here and watch you struggle
Your heart bleeds with so much pain
The everyday agony of trying to stay sane
I wish I could make things better
And help you breath without constrain

© 4 minutes ago   heartache-family • rhyme


Scheme a ABBCB dxdaxd exefaf ABBCB xdxd ghgh ABBCB x
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 1111100111 111101110 1001111101 11111110 01110111 01111101 111011010111 11011101 111001 111110101101101 1111110 1111 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 111010111 01111 11111011111 111111101 01011 011111101 101011 1111111001 111101110 1111111 0101100110111 11111110 01110101 100111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,312
Words 262
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 6, 6, 5, 4, 4, 5, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on July 31, 2021

Submitted by Mward402021 on July 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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