Analysis of Our Last Song



Singing and dancing from the heart,
Hugging, kissing and ******
all was for a short while

I'm sad but my sadness is hidden behind my smile.
"Till death do us part" they still echo in my head,
Was it worth it? Nothing lasts forever i know
but you should have lived a few years with me.

All those moments shared come back as memories made,
I remember the first thing you said to me,
How i didn't look bad at all
I remember dancing bare footed to our favourite slow song

When love gets sweeter the angel of death becomes jealous
because of fate there's no more us, but a sad lonely me
You were too good to be real,
I told you that angels look like you
and now you're laying with them singing our song from the pillow of your grave.


Scheme XXA AXXB XBXX XBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10010101 10100 111011 1111101100111 111111110011 111110101011 1111101111 111011111001 10100111111 11101111 101010110110111 11110010110110 01111111101101 1011111 111110111 0111011101011010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 724
Words 144
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

A sad romantic poem by a well established sad romantic poet. The poem was first published in 2020.

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Written on October 18, 2020

Submitted by ashlynbrena on August 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashlyn Brena

Ashlyn Brena is a Zimbabwean writer born on the 24th of June 2001. He is a writer of poetry, short stories,songs, short and feature films. He is rooted in the theme of love. He is the C.E.O and Founder of Pies_negros. more…

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