Analysis of Think about us

Ashlyn Brena 2001 (Bulawayo)



es I failed to take good care of you, I know,
But when you go don't turn your back forever.
Think about me, I loved you I just failed to show,

You deserved more than what I could give.
But still I tried hard, you seem to have never noticed
You ignored all my efforts and chose to leave.

Love needs patience, you never cared.
...It's fine
When he treats you better than I did-
Remember I also cared for you, I was always there for you.

They said we paired well, it wasn't hard to believe
Think about us, can we just separate, vapor like we never existed.
If I wronged you find it in your heart to forgive.


Scheme AXA BXC XXXX CXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111111 11111111010 101111111111 101111111 1111111111010 10111100111 11101101 11 111110111 010110111111111 111111101101 101111110101110010 111111011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 592
Words 120
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on May 14, 2021

Submitted by ashlynbrena on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashlyn Brena

Ashlyn Brena is a Zimbabwean writer born on the 24th of June 2001. He is a writer of poetry, short stories,songs, short and feature films. He is rooted in the theme of love. He is the C.E.O and Founder of Pies_negros. more…

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