Analysis of THE RED RUNNER



The red runner’s coming past the post
She thinks she’s coming fast,
But the unemployed and all the poor
Say that she’s coming last.

The runner is in Canberra
And she is talking up a storm,
But when the talking is all done
What is the runner’s form?

She’s coming last on welfare
The poor can’t pay their rents,
They’re moving out into the streets
Living in boxes and in tents.

The pensioners are starving too
No succour comes their way,
But real estate agents are on high
With prices that none can pay.

The runner talks of helping all
But all she ever does is talk,
Like Rudd the Dud and Little Johnny
It’s time she took a walk.

Time the runner moved on out
Unless she starts to get things done,
And when it comes to achievements
To date she has got none.

It’s time the talking stopped
And she did a little work,
It’s time to help the pensioners
And not to merely talk.

It’s time the rich were taxed
To revive the welfare state,
It’s time to fix employment here
And shut the bloody gate.

Hawke the Dork stood grinning broadly
As he held the damn gate wide,
All our businesses went offshore
And Australian jobs they died.

So Red Runner stop your talking
And help the unemployed survive,
Bring usury rents under control
And let Australia thrive.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA BCDC XEXE XFXF XGHG XDXD XXXG XIXI HJXJ XKXK XXB
Poetic Form
Metre 011010101 111101 10010101 111101 0101010 01110101 11010111 110101 110111 011111 11010101 10010001 01001101 11111 110110111 1101111 01011101 11110111 110101010 111101 1010111 01111111 01111010 111111 110101 0110101 11110100 011101 110101 101011 11110101 010101 10111010 1110111 110100111 0010111 11101110 0100101 110011001 010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,297
Words 242
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Just my second poem (I think?) about Australia's first, worst, and hopefully last female prime minister, Julia Gillard.

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Written on February 11, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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