Analysis of Be with me forever



I'll miss you when the sun shines
I'll miss you when the stars are high
I know you were strong,
I know you were never wrong,
I know you were brave,
I know you hate being a slave.
 I'll remember those eyes that shine in the dark,
I'll forever miss that spark!

I'll remember that tale which you waged every time you saw me,
That made me a million times happier and smile with glee!!
I'll remember feeding you from my hand,
And I'll always remember the conversations between us which we both only understand!!
Now, who would be there to welcome me on the door,
By just laying on the floor !!

Now who would listen to my useless talks
Now, who would be there with me for the rest of the walk!!


Scheme XXAABBCC DDEEFF XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 11110111 11101 1110101 11101 11111001 10101111001 1010111 1010111111001111 11101011000111 1010101111 01101000100111111001 111111101101 1110101 1111011101 1111111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 674
Words 133
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 176
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

It's about my dog whom I love the most and I never wanted to loose him but destiny took us apart

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Written on August 07, 2021

Submitted by asthasingh1616 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 12, 2023

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