Analysis of THE NOT-MUCH MAN (Being a report from one palaeanthropologist to another)



The story of the Not-Much Man
Is a story that brings no joy,
The poor just call him, ‘Rudd the Dud.’
The Rich say, ‘Kev's our boy!’

The Not-Much Man is wondering
How he can fix the future,
But he’s happy to leave us dying now
That’s the brutal truth for sure.

The Not-Much Man just says,
‘Today is dead and gone,
‘It’s not my fault the poor won’t die out
‘Why must they keep living on?’

The Not-Much Man is cretinous
He’s such a hopeless case,
He’ll let the pensioners die of hunger
To feed the greedy Master Race.

The Not-Much Man is lying
About the state of Australia,
He isn’t man enough to admit
After six months he’s a failure.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA BCXX DXXX DECE BFXC XXF
Poetic Form
Metre 01010111 10101111 01111101 0111101 01111100 1111010 1110111101 1010111 011111 011101 111101111 1111101 011111 110101 1101001110 11010101 0111110 01011010 11101101 10111010 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 714
Words 135
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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The story of the Not-Much Man Is a story that brings no joy, The poor just call him, ‘Rudd the Dud.’ The Rich say, ‘Kev's our boy!’

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Written on February 03, 2009

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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