Analysis of FAMILIAL JUICE STEW
It was bare' a month back, or so it seems
We were seeing off poor Uncle Ron,
Denise, Cheryl, Kaylene, and I
With Aunt Ivy dourly watching on.
Then from the crowd distant faces loomed
Our cousins from Vic's countryside,
Robin and Sally who we'd last seen in ‘87
Had come to town when Uncle Ron died.
Many years ago on Lind Crest farm
John, Sally, and I had frolicked and played,
Three young mates in Gippsland East
Playing at farmers through the summer days.
John as the eldest was ‘course the boss
He'd tell Sally and me what we would do,
How to pass the holidays away
Till we'd return to Melbourne as summer flew.
But in 1987 John sadly passed away
And Sally came down to help us mourn,
But as years have turned to decades
Without my brother, I'm still forlorn.
So Denise and I were fair intent
On striking up old friendships again,
But with a curt, abrupt exit
Sally made it plain we're not her friends.
Robin reluctantly made some small talk
But as fast as possible walked away,
Leaving us to ponder their rudeness when
We had been such friends in our younger days.
But time makes fools of all men
And it seems of many women too,
So let them live alone and lonely
And in their familial juices stew.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | XAXA XBXB XXXC XDED EFXF XGXX XEGC GDXD XXX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (23%) |
Metre | 1110111111 101011101 0110101 11101101 110110101 10101110 1001011110 111111011 101011111 110011101 111011 1011010101 110101101 1110011111 11101001 11011101101 10110101 010111111 11111101 011101101 101010101 110111001 11010110 101111101 1001001111 1111100101 1011101101 11111010101 1111111 011110101 111101010 001010101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,244 |
Words | 237 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 111 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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It was bare' a month back, or so it seems We were seeing off poor Uncle Ron, Denise, Cheryl, Kaylene, and I With Aunt Ivy dourly watching on.
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Written on February 07, 2009
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 18, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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