Analysis of THREE EVIL HARRIDANS



Three energy vampires
Leeching the life out,
Of their son and brother
Leaving behind nothing,
But a dry, lifeless husk.

A vampire leech
Calling out from her bedroom,
Needing “loving” care so
Her poor son has no life,
Nothing but a slave.

Three evil hags conspire
Against their own flesh,
Reducing him to nothing
But mere chattel,
A slave to serve their needs.

Evil, lying harridans
Sob and wail for pity,
Sucking all the life from
The son and brother whom,
Has now become their slave.

Poor boy lives so lonely
No life or love of his own,
Forced to wait hand and foot
On three evil shrews,
Drawing off his life force.

Almost forty-three yet
He’s had no life at all,
Forced to live in servitude
Waiting hand and foot,
On a wretched, evil crone.

“What does your life matter?”
Says his eldest sister,
“You agreed to sacrifice it,”
Insists the younger hag,
So his freedom ends.

Evil harpies fighting
Over the dried bones,
Of their son and brother
Whose body was their slave,
His life force sucked away.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme axBcx xdxxe bxcxx afxde fghax xxxhg bbxxx cxBex xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 1011 111010 100110 101101 0101 101101 101011 011111 10101 1101010 01111 0101110 1110 011111 10101 101110 101011 010101 110111 111110 1111111 111101 11101 101111 11011 111111 111010 10101 1010101 111110 111010 1011101 010101 11101 10110 10011 111010 110111 111101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,041
Words 192
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Three energy vampires Leeching the life out, Of their son and brother

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Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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