Analysis of JOHN DANNO, EWANKER, AND PAYENEMY
Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)
It was July or August 2008 when John Danno
Promised to get my income growing,
By investing in his "Get Poor Inc."
My business would soon get going.
He said we'd sell computer software
On eWanker over the Internet,
The profits would soon be rolling in
"You won't believe what you will get!"
He as good as said if I stuck with him
Pretty soon we'd both be rich,
But when the sales came rolling in
There was just a single hitch.
People soon complained to eWanker
That the goods he sent were phony,
But since I was the one selling them
eWanker didn't want to know him.
Though I'd never seen the goods he sent
He's in America, while I'm in Australia,
eWanker said I was the crook
That it was from my moral failure.
People took money from me through PayEnemy
But when I tried to do the same,
(I paid John Danno 60% of sale price)
PayEnemy said, "Distributor's can't be blamed."
"It's the crooked sellers who are at fault
And absolutely no-one else!"
So they made me pay from John Danno's crimes
But refused to give me any help.
I learnt my lesson about trusting others
Never do it when investing money,
If a deal seems too good to be true
You can bet there's something funny.
Now I never sell on eWanker
I found a better site, Oztion,
And at last, no thanks to John Danny
My selling income is growing.
I've also learnt that PayEnemy
Is no honest seller's friend,
So if you've got money to pay overseas
Find a safer, surer way to send.
And in the end what John Danno said
In a strange way turned out true,
"You won't believe what you will get!"
And I didn't, when I was screwed!
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | abxb cdaD efaf caxe xgxx exxx xxxx xaha caab eixi xhDx ixg |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111110111 10111110 101001111 11011110 11110101 1110010 010111100 11011111 1111111111 1011111 11011100 1110101 1010111 10111010 111101101 1101111 111010111 100100110010 111101 111111010 101101111 11111101 1111111 110100111 1010101111 0010111 111111111 101111101 11110011010 1011101010 101111111 11111010 1110111 1101011 011111110 1101110 110111 1110101 11111011101 101010111 00011111 0011111 11011111 01101111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,647 |
Words | 320 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 47 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 109 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
Poem about how I was ripped off for $9,000 by a flimflam artist from Chicago, named John Danno, aided and abetted by a big named eselling site and a money changing company owned, at that time, by eWanker!
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Written on 2008
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 21, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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