Analysis of DEFACTO LIFE
. 1. 10..
Life for me Ernest Hemingway
Is merely pretence, Would listen to my plight,
It never seems And know how I’ve suffered
To make much sense.From merely being alive.
2:.11..
Joy of living Kipling and Keats
Is known by others, Yes and Longfellow too,
But somehow in life Would all know of the pain
I always suffer. That life put me through.
3. 12.
I’m told that love Hardy and Dante
Can bring great joy, And even Robert Blair,
Yet to my women Would think of my life
I’m but a toy. With such utter despair.
4. 13.
They use me as Thomas Moore, yes
Other men use them, And Alexander Pope,
Paying me back Would know I’ve lived life
For their other men. Without purpose or hope.
5. 14.
Life must surely be George Santayana
A wondrous thing, And even Walter Scott,
For the very few that Knew of the good things
Love doesn’t sting. My life never got.
6. 15.
Oscar Wilde would Robert Louie Stevenson
Surely cry for me, And the great Mark Twain,
For we poets know Would know that my life
A common need. Has been one long, sad refrain.
7.16.
Shakespeare tooSalvador Quasimodo
Would surely moan,And Upton Sinclair,
For all the pleasureHave tasted the success
I’ve never known.That for me wasn’t there.
8. 17.
George Bernard Shaw Milton and Priestly
Would sob with shame, Would see with remorse,
Muttering again All the troubles I’ve met
And again my name. On my life’s sorry course.
9. 18.
Alfred Tennyson tooOrwell and Huxley
Would moan my strife,And perhaps Tolstoy too,
For, for me sufferingWould mourn for my life
Is a way of life.Now that it is through.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1 1111010 1101110111 1101011110 1111101001 1 11101001 1111010101 1101111101 111011111 1 111110010 1111010101 1111011111 1101111001 1 11111011 1011100101 101111111 11101011011 1 111011010 0101010101 10101111011 11111101 1 10111001100 1011100111 1110111111 01011111101 1 110010 11011001 110110001 11011111 1 101110010 111111101 10001101011 00111111101 1 101001010 11110111 11111111 101111111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,136 |
Words | 299 |
Sentences | 37 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 45, 3 |
Lines Amount | 48 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 629 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 180 |
About this poem
One of my more moody existential poems from the 1980s.
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Written on 1981
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 25, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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