Analysis of dreams like water

bluejay1985 2002 (A state of panic.)



As I danced,

As you slept,

We forgot to fight.

but now the sky is blue again,

and the birds scream our name.

to the tune of the old, broken feather.

a thin slice of emotions.

We forgot to fight.

Those bright, yellow swords sent by God himself.

"awaken" he says.

"for the tree has fallen, and the river flows right through."

"I'm here", I exclaimed.


Scheme x x A x x x x A x x x x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 10111 11011101 0011101 1011011010 0111010 10111 1110111101 01011 1011100010111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 392
Words 73
Sentences 10
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on August 25, 2021

Submitted by bluejay1985 on August 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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bluejay1985

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