Analysis of DAY LABOURER BLUES



Broken backs and fractured thighs,
Keep on working to appease the wife.

Overworked and underpaid,
No compensation ... you just don't rate;
Toe the line or be brought down,
You're better off Not hanging around.

Meet the demands of the government,
Though you feel dead you're only spent;
A fear of living going round in your head
No point trying, you'd be better off dead.

Feeling shattered to the core,
Your soul has bent, your senses raw;
No hope on Earth of better climes,
You've got no worth so how about dying?

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XX XXXX XXAA XXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 111010101 010101 10101111 1011111 110111001 100110100 11111101 01110101011 1110111011 1010101 11111101 11111101 1111110110 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 570
Words 101
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Poem or song lyric from 1975.

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Written on 1975

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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