Analysis of THE HUNTER & THE HUNTED



Through the midnight forest
The hunter and the hunted run,
Trying to outrun each other
For their own goals before the sun.

When the sun slowly rises
The hunter can move in for the kill,
Hoping soon to bag his quarry
Just to get a sadistic thrill.

Running, bobbing, weaving fast
The hunted hopes to survive the night,
Yet he knows his hopes will fade rapidly
With the coming of daylight.

The hunted knows that come the sun
He cannot hide so easily in the light,
But with the hunter on his trail
Can he hope to survive until twilight?

The hunter stops, listens, hoping
To hear movement in the verdant green,
Hoping to find a trail of broken branches
To show him where his prey has been.

Loping through the darkened forest
Tom-toms booming within his chest,
Fearful of ever standing soon
Yet by daylight, he'll have to rest.

The sounds of the hunter
And the sounds of the hunted,
But which one are you
When the race is finally run?

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABCB DEFE XGFG BGXG XXDX AHXH CXXB XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 01000101 10101110 11110101 1011010 010110101 10111110 11100101 1010101 010110101 1111111100 101011 01011101 11011100001 11010111 111101011 01011010 111000101 10110111010 11111111 1101010 11100111 10110101 1111111 011010 0011010 11111 10111001 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 972
Words 182
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Written a month back, based on a haiku poem I wrote c.1975.

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Written on August 04, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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