Analysis of A wish



My tears be few drops
To make you cool
My sighs be a soft wind
To make you comfort

Withered flowers of my Hopes
Be a carpet on your way
Rough fire that burns my heart
Be a stream for you

Pleasant memories that make me cry
Be beautiful dreams for you
My dying eyes be a jewel lamp
To give light for you


Scheme XXXX XXXA XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 11111 1111 111011 11110 1010111 1010111 1101111 10111 101001111 1100111 110110101 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 291
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Anjalie Chandima Silva

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