Analysis of Pain



You bring me pain
excruciating one
that I shed
in tears of ocean
of drowning own self
with no rescue
in deep of agony
suffocating through
a river of wash
of stab in the heart
from a heavy knife
breaking in to half
tiny pieces of glass
bleeding into death
with shattered dreams
that I still stand strong
wrapped with a scar
around my flesh body
that carry within forever
of a reminder
that I shall remember
like a life learning lesson
never be blinded by ignorant


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHIJKLMNOFPPPBQ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 01001 111 01110 11011 1110 011100 1001 01011 11001 10101 10011 101011 10011 1101 11111 1101 011110 11001010 10010 111010 1011010 101101100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 440
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 376
Words per stanza (avg) 87

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A description of pain

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Written on September 09, 2021

Submitted by Hon on September 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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