Analysis of The Two Ships



On the sea of life they floated,
Brothers twain in manhood's pride,
And the good ship 'Temperance' bore them,
Safely o'er the stormy tide.
Not a thought of rock or breaker,
Not a fear of wreck had they,
For their ship was strong and steady-
Faithful, trusty, night and day.

So they floated on together,
Full of youth's elastic joy,
Floated till the air was startled
With the cry of 'Boat ahoy!'
And they saw a craft beside them,
Dainty, jaunty, frail, and fair,
And its banner showed a wine-glass,
Painted as its symbol there.

And again the stranger shouted,
'Boat ahoy! a friend is near!
Captain of yon gallant vessel,
Do you see, and do you hear?
We're the 'Social Glass,' my hearties,
And a jolly, jovial crew.
We are bound for Pleasure Valley,
And we would be friends with you.'

But the brothers stood in silence,
Though they could not help but hear,
And the elder's heart was throbbing
With a vague and chilling fear.
And again the stranger pleaded,
'Come aboard the 'Social Glass'!
We will entertain you warmly,
And the time will quickly pass.'

Still the elder stood unheeding,
Still he did not move or turn,
And his mien was cold and haughty,
And his face was dark and stern.
But the younger whispered to him,
'Surely, we are churls to stand
In this sullen, boorish silence;
Let us offer friendship's hand.

'See! they beckon us to join them!
Beckon us with word and smile.
I will not refuse them longer,
I will join them for a while.'
Then the 'Social Glass' rowed nearer,
And he joined the jovial throng,
And they gathered round about him,
Greeting him with laugh and song.

Then the elder cried in anguish,
Loud and wild his accents fell:
'Know you not, O brother, brother!
Yonder ship is bound for hell?
See the clouds that hover o'er you!
And the day is growing dark:
There is ruin and destruction
For each soul upon that bark.

'Oh! come back! Why did you leave me?
It is certain death to stay,
Do not loiter! do not linger!
Brother, brother, come away!'
But the wild winds only answered
To his agonizing plea;
And the 'Social Glass' went bounding
Lightly o'er the troubled sea.

He could hear their shouts of laughter,
He could see their goblets shine,
He could see his darling brother
With his lips all red with wine.
Ah! a seething, boiling maelstrom
Lay within their very track,
And he warned them of their danger,
And he strove to turn them back.

But they did not, would not heed him:
On they went in wildest glee!
Nearer, nearer to the whirlpool,
Nearer to the boiling sea,
Till the 'Social Glass' was buried
In the seething, rushing wave,
And each mad and wreckless voyager
Found a dark and awful grave.

And the lonely brother floated
Calmly o'er the stormy tide,
For the good ship 'Temperance' bore him
Safely o'er the waters wide.
And he never left her shelter
Till the voyage of life was o'er,
And he anchored where the angels
Waited for him on the shore.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 101011 001110011 10100101 10111110 1011111 11111010 1010101 11101010 1110101 10101110 1011101 01101011 1010101 01101011 1011101 00101010 1010111 10111010 1110111 1010111 00101001 11111010 0111111 10101010 1111111 0011110 1010101 00101010 1010101 1101110 0011101 101011 1111111 01111010 0111101 10101011 1011111 01101010 111011 11101111 1011101 11101110 1111101 10101110 01101001 01101011 1011101 10101010 1011101 11111010 1011111 101110101 0011101 11100010 1110111 11111111 1110111 11101110 1010101 10111010 1110001 00101110 10100101 11111110 111111 11111010 1111111 10101010 1011101 01111110 0111111 11111111 1110101 1010101 1010101 10101110 0010101 01101100 1010101 00101010 10100101 101110011 10100101 01101010 101011110 01101010 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,795
Words 531
Sentences 38
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 88
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 12, 2023

2:40 min read
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Ella Wheeler Wilcox

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