Analysis of THE CRAWLER

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Acid trails pervade the town
Where the crawler has just been,
A loathsome mollusk-like being
A hideous bloated fiend.

Like a giant garden slug
The crawler dissolves its victim,
Within its acidic slime
Then slowly devours him.

Around a darkened town
The yellowish fiend slides,
Easing along its acidic juices
Like a Kraken in the tide.

Sliding across toward loners
Outside in the evil night,
Unaware the horrid crawler
Has got them in its sights.

Oozing up its startled victim
The crawler releases the acid slime,
Which quickly kills its prey
Dissolving him in good time.

The crawler is a throwback
From the dawn of time,
A mutant from some horrific past
Crawling from the primordial slime.

It oozes around the sleeping town
Like some giant shell-less snail,
Regurgitating human bones
Along its putrid slimy trail.

Returning to whence it came
Some festering, stagnant lagoon,
It's hiding from the strong sunlight
To reawaken at next moon.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXXX XBCX AXXX XDEX BCEC XCXC AFXF XGDG XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 101111 01010110 0100101 1010101 0101110 0110101 1100101 010101 010011 1001101010 101001 10010110 1100101 010101 111011 10111010 010100101 110111 0101011 01101 10111 010110101 101001001 110010101 1110111 1101 01110101 0101111 11001001 1101011 1010111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 975
Words 166
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Acid trails pervade the town Where the crawler has just been,

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Written on July 18, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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