Analysis of Fucking Lies

Greg Roundtree 1961 (Georgia)



“Fucking Lies”
 I shot my woman’s lover, then laid him in his grave. Deep beneath a cypress stump, forever there he’ll stay!
 I turned to her and said these words “You bitch you fucking lied! You had to know that this would end, in murder suicide!”   
 An as she turned to runaway, she never had a chance! I pulled the trigger once again, an ended our romance!
 On bended knee’s I bowed my head, just as the hammer fell! I knew the price that I would pay, eternally in Hell!
 So when your getting married, be sure of what you say. Don’t ever tell a fucking lie, on your wedding day!
 By G.R.


Scheme ABCDEBF
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1111101110111010101010111 111001111111011111111101010 1111110110101110101011101001 1101111111010111011111010001 11110101111111101010111101 11
Characters 604
Words 115
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 63
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 441
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted by GregRoundtree on September 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Greg Roundtree

I’m an American Military Veteran and proud patriot. Born in the Great State of Georgia, living the dream on a lake in North Florida. God Bless these United States of America! more…

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