Analysis of NIGHT TRAIN



A ghostly whistle breaks the silence
Of a lonesome fog-bound night,
The night train rides the rails to Hell
Until the onset of daylight.

A mouldy corpse is the conductor
A greying skeleton drives the train,
And if the living dare to step aboard
They will never get off again.

The night train is a steam train
Leaving a trail of black, lethal smoke,
It kills all creatures passing near
Some burning, but most just choke.

Its wheels screech on rusty metal
Sounding like evil banshee cries,
Scaring away all living creatures
Still out in the dead of night.

Mummies and hideous corpses
Ride along this abominable track,
Zombies, ghouls, and vampires know
That there is no coming back.

Skeletal warriors are aboard
After fighting battles long ago,
Riding on the train of death
To an afterlife unknown.

Drifters, whistlers, Babadook
All travel upon the night train,
All hoping somehow to escape
But the Bugler plays a sad refrain.

The night train is coming your way
It'll pass your town ever so soon,
So stay safe inside after twilight
Don't wander out beneath the moon.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA XBCX BDXD XXXA XEFE CFXX DBXB XGAG XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 010101010 1010111 01110111 010111 010110010 010100101 0101011101 11101101 0111011 100111101 11110101 1101111 11111010 10110011 100111010 1100111 10010010 1011010001 1010101 1111101 100100101 101010101 1010111 111001 10101 11001011 1101101 10110101 01111011 101111011 11101101 11010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,103
Words 195
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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A ghostly whistle breaks the silence Of a lonesome fog-bound night, The night train rides the rails to Hell

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Written on August 02, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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