Analysis of 130



What hair he has upon his head is gray,
and where none grows his pate reflects the light.
The cigarettes he smokes, a pack each day,
Infuse their scent across his ample height.
He does not have the body of a god,
nor does he have the stamina of youth.
He early retires for the night. He’s flawed.
He puts sticks up his nose: he’s quite a goof.
The scars he carries on body and heart
run deeper in him than their marks suggest.
The damage they’ve caused him to stop this start.
His fear to himself he finally confessed.
Yet all of these “defects” make him much more real
than any imagined or dreamt “ideal.”


Scheme ABABCDEFGHGHII
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111 0111110101 001110111 0111011101 1111010101 1111010011 1100110111 1111111101 0111011001 1100111101 0101111111 11101110001 11111011111 1100101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 608
Words 117
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 469
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Written on 2021

Submitted by M-Sten on September 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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