Analysis of Ivy tears



My eyes are dry
Even my tears won't lubricate
I am so angry you make me
REPEAT REPEAT REPEAT REPEAT
THE SAME MISTAKE SCREAM WITH ME

So sublime
So beaten in
So tired

My jaw was so straight
Functional pain manipulations
Weak without prey why must i
REPEAT REPEAT REPEAT REPEAT
SO MUCH I CANT THINK WHY CANT I

breathe
For no reason at all we breathe
Our ribcages in silent union

Sublime
Resigned
Tired


Scheme abcDc exf bxaDa ggx exf
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1011110 11110111 01010101 0101111 101 1100 110 11111 10010010 1011111 01010101 11111111 1 11101111 10101010 01 01 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 392
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 5, 3, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Helpless pain that last as long as time can

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Submitted by Ophanim on September 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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