Analysis of OUT IN THE HAUNTED NIGHT

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Out in the haunted night
Leviathans are lumbering,
While safely locked indoors
Innocents are slumbering.

Slithering snake-like fiends
Crawl around your bedroom floor,
While outside of your house
Evil beings knock at your door.

Sinister creatures lurking
Outside your darkened home,
Through the streets and alleys
Loathsome behemoths roam.

Out in the haunted night
Malevolent beings do stare,
As the guileless walk outside
Unknowing what's lurking there.

Omnivores and carnivores
Both hunting after human prey,
Lurking in the shadows
Beneath an evil moon's rays.

Villainous forms are stirring
Waiting till the witching hour,
Tiny things all spines and teeth
Above them colossuses tower.

Hidden safely locked indoors
The wise refuse to go outside,
Knowing, if the stalkers get them
It will be the night they died.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Abcb xdxd bexe Afgf cxxx bhxh cgxg xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 100101 11100 11011 1001100 100111 101111 111111 10101111 1001010 111101 101010 100101 100101 01001011 1010111 0101101 1010 11010101 10001 0111011 1001110 10101010 1011101 011110 101011 01011111 10101011 1110111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 853
Words 136
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Out in the haunted night Leviathans are lumbering,

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Written on September 06, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on September 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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