Analysis of EVENING SHADOWS FALL



Screaming from a darkening alley
As evening shadows start to fall,
Mournful weeping like a weary ghost
Casts an eerie, dirge-like pall.

Sobbing fills the twilit sky
As death comes surely creeping round,
Evil slinking through darkened suburbs
Of a lifeless, fearful town.

Death goes hunting through the shadows
Of a town that’s lost to fright,
Wary inhabitants stay locked indoors
Hiding till the coming daylight.

Dressed in raiments of a beggar
Through dark shadows, death does glide,
Hoping soon to find an egress
To reach those hidden deep inside.

Silent, like a shadowy phantom
Death creeps around the empty street,
Eager soon to snatch the life from
Homeless folk whom it might meet.

As evening shadows slowly fall
Terror slinks along your spine,
Racing through the darkened streets
You’re frantic just to get inside:

For those who walk the streets by night
Are prone to meet an awful soul,
A figure like some fabled reaper
Killing is its only goal.

Grimly stalking through the shadows
Of a suburb lost to terror,
Like some throwback to primordial times
A living, breathing, killing error.

Through the streets of Melbourne Town
A doleful figure slowly walks,
On the trail of luckless street folk
Through the night the figure stalks.

Gone all hopes; all promises
Gone now are all cheery dreams,
Through night’s veil, dark shadows creep
Then from the dark rings out loud screams.

Evening shadows slowly fade
As the daylight comes around,
And the loathsome reaping figure
Goes to hide deep underground.

Till the shadows fall again
Bringing with them dreadful promise,
That the horrid cowled figure
Will bring to all death’s icy kiss.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXX XBXC DEXE FGXG HIHI AXXG EJFJ DFXF CKXK XLXL XBFB XXFX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101010010 1101111 101010101 1110111 101011 11110101 10111010 1010101 1110101 1011111 100100111 1010101 1011010 111111 10111101 11110101 101010010 11010101 10111011 1011111 1101101 1010111 1010101 11011101 11110111 11111101 010111010 1011101 1010101 10101110 111101001 010101010 1011101 01010101 10111011 1010101 1111100 1111101 111111 11011111 101101 101101 00101010 111110 101101 10111010 1010110 11111101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,664
Words 283
Sentences 12
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Screaming from a darkening alley As evening shadows start to fall, Mournful weeping like a weary ghost Casts an eerie, dirge-like pall.

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Written on June 10, 2010

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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