Analysis of OUT OF THE SHADOWS

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Out of the dark shadows
Steps impending death,
Foul abominations which
Can steal away your breath.

Out in the darkened night
Evil creatures slowly roam,
Hoping to catch the unwary
Far away from their safe home.

Neanderthal-like ape-men
Lurching through the village,
Hoping very soon to plunder
To rape, to maim, to pillage.

Quickly scaling to the rooftop
They enter a sleeping house,
Then despite their giant size
Creep around quietly as a mouse.

Ripping open bedroom doors
They rape all the sleeping women,
Killing children and animals
Eviscerating all of the men.

Then back out into the night
To storm around the streets,
Hunting, stalking, killing
Every living thing they meet.

Then as Darkfall does retreat
They slink away yet again,
To hide in caves outside the town
They use as their private den.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA BCXC DXXX XEXE XXXD BXXF FDXD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 10101 111 110111 100101 1010101 10110010 1011111 010111 101010 10101110 1111110 1010101 1100101 1011101 101100101 101011 11101010 10100100 11101 1110101 110101 101010 10010111 111101 1101101 11011101 1111101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 844
Words 145
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Out of the dark shadows Steps impending death,

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Written on September 06, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on October 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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