Analysis of IN THIS DARK AND LONELY PLACE



In this dark and lonely place
Shadowy beings are creeping,
Hunting after lone travellers
So that they can start reaping.

In alleyways and dark streets
Loathsome creatures wait,
Hoping to find passersby
About to meet a deadly fate.

In this dreadful, lonely town
Only losers call their home,
Where innocents surely avoid
And the wary completely disown.

Sinister beings are hunting
Beneath the red moon's glare,
Looking for any travellers
To add to their bill of fare.

Only the most unwary walk
Are outside after twilight falls,
While in the flickering shadows
Malevolent predators call.

In this dark and lonely place
Where only terror ever grows,
Good things surely stay away
And happiness is truly unknown.

Leviathan beings lumbering
Through the darkened streets,
Hunting for human beings
Hoping very soon to eat.

Lonely people shudder as
They hear behemoths shrill,
Unaware that death is closing in
Readying for the kill.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Abcb dexe xxxf bgcg xxhx Ahxf bdxx xixi xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 0110101 10010110 10101100 1111110 010011 10101 1011100 01110101 0110101 1010111 11001001 001001001 10010110 010111 10110100 1111111 10010101 1111011 1001001 01001001 0110101 11010101 1110101 010011001 010010100 10101 1011010 1010111 1010101 110101 01111100 100101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 959
Words 160
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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In this dark and lonely place Shadowy beings are creeping, Hunting after lone travellers So that they can start reaping.

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Written on October 06, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on October 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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