Analysis of A Spark



My eyes were stuck in one position
Like two stubbornly frozen spheres.
They could only see a little
As they focused in one direction.

But then a candle flame alighted in
My stomach and the warmth spread to
My heart.
First it melted the frozen heartbeats.

And then it melted my eyes.
Finally I could see
And the tears just slid on by.


Scheme AXXA XXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110101010 11100101 11101010 111001010 11010110 11000111 11 11100101 0111011 100111 0011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 324
Words 63
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I wrote this poem because of a thought that came to me while I was sitting outside and looking at the sun. It is a description of that moment when I noticed the nature around me, and strangely it seemed so unreasonably pretty at that time. It was like I had finally come to appreciate the scenery around me. So this poem is based off of that feeling and emotional experience.

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Written on October 01, 2021

Submitted by Awkwardwriting97 on October 21, 2021

Modified on April 08, 2023

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