Analysis of May I

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)



May I Lord
Be what you need me to be
May I be a leader
In your victory
May I be surrendered
The way you need me to be
May I respect your laws
So the enemy shall flee
May I not take for granted
The blessings you provide for me
May I always remember
You holds the key to my eternity...


Scheme ABCBDBEBFBCB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111111 111010 01100 111010 0111111 110111 1010011 1111110 01010111 111010 1101110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 279
Words 62
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 219
Words per stanza (avg) 62

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Doreene Felder

Living life the best I know how in the most positive form. more…

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