Analysis of PISCINE
Scaly piscine horrors emerge
From beneath a murky sea,
Hoping for lost swimmers
Longing soon to feed.
Green and slimy like
Something now long dead,
Surround a sea-bound village
Filling the people with dread.
More deadly than any sharp
They lust for human flesh,
Trying to grab the innocent
To drag them to their deaths.
Swarming around small craft
Trying to overturn them,
To feast upon the passengers
Whom Neptune did condemn.
Reaching a sinking vessel
They encircle the dying craft,
Desiring to eat lone swimmers
Or those on a makeshift raft.
Scaly piscine horrors emerge
Seeking out human meat,
Walking slowly onto land
Needing soon to feast.
Deep down in the ocean
Piscine monsters are born,
Then crawl out on the shore
To eat by break of dawn.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | Axbx xcxc xxxx debe xdbd Axxx xxxx xxx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111001 1010101 101110 10111 10101 10111 0101110 1001011 1101101 111101 10110100 111111 100111 101101 11010100 110101 1001010 10100101 010011110 111011 111001 101101 1010101 10111 110010 11011 111101 111111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 790 |
Words | 139 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 83 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
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Scaly piscine horrors emerge From beneath a murky sea,
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Written on September 22, 2021
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on November 02, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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