Analysis of um dia no parque



It was a sunny day so hot the heat inside that bus made me curse, but her beautiful eyes soothed the soul as only the truth can. there is how to feel this joy coming from you brings to a spirit already torn apart like my needle and thread for a suture, is this really motherhood?

Wear a nice outfit!

take care of mine or your hair, out of vanity and also because I know you don't have it. beautiful figure in blue headlights with straight hair like my pockets that day, but her demeanor and her long, wide smiles made me simmer in a cauldron of love, the two of us together watching fish swim

and birds sing.

I passed my knowledge on to you that day, and far from feeling jealous or ashamed I saw you find life lighter in a bag of popcorn to throw to animals who were also in awe of your beauty.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
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Characters 800
Words 165
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 125
Words per line (avg) 32
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 32

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para meu filho

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Written on December 11, 2021

Submitted by ericaepeterlach on November 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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