Analysis of Muddy life
I know I'm not somebody special anymore ,
just got the feeling of being left alone,
I always knew you're gonna leave me in the end,
write a long text about a breakup and click "send",
I'm feeling numb and fully fake the reaction,
Cannot forget the pain of this pitiful attraction,
Its just that sadness is my brain's big fraction,
You broke our promise not gonna lie it always felt like fiction,
Not leaving me? Come on its so absurd,
To even think about the fact that I'm just dirt,
A messy, dirty fucking piece of shit,
Guess my anxiety was right or so it seemed,
I don't miss you,
I miss the thought of what we were,
I miss what we just did before,
It really hurts seeing you so happy without me,
It cuts me deep inside and I just can't go without you ,
You were my only light in the end of the tunnel,
And now its pure dark and I wanna yell "fuck you" ,
But I still care for you all though I shouldn't,
You were so perfect and I couldn't ,
I couldn't see the pain thats on your mind,
I guess you were that freaking kind,
It's hard to hate you because you're not a dick,
It's hard to hate you because ,just like me, without somebody you just sink.
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Metre | 1111101001 11010110101 11111011001 10110101011 110101010010 10010111100010 11110111110 1110101101111110 1101111101 110101011111 0101010111 110100111111 1111 11011110 11111101 1101101110011 11110101111011 1011010011010 011110110111 11111111110 101010110 1101011111 11101101 11111011101 11111011110110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,151 |
Words | 249 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 876 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 229 |
About this poem
Loneliness overtook me one day and made me write this
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Written on November 25, 2021
Submitted by nimble on November 25, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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