Analysis of VOLCANO

Jesus Betancourt 1955 (New York)



Dark gray smoke replaced clouds in the sky
Ash flakes came down just like charcoal snow
I felt like in any moment I might die
In just how long, I didn't know

I was just outside of Java
I'm sure I must be dreaming
In my nightmare I saw the glow of lava
Felt the scorching heat from it steaming

Earthquake started jerking
Knocking me to the ground
Rubbing my ash covered eyes, I was awakening
From a deep sleep, thankfully safe and sound


Scheme ABAB CDCD DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11111001 11111111 11101010111 01111101 11111110 1111110 0111101110 101011110 11010 101101 1011101110100 1011100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 438
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Currently occurring, always possible

Font size:
 

Written on October 07, 2021

Submitted by jb809499 on December 07, 2021

Modified on May 01, 2023

26 sec read
46

Discuss this Jesus Betancourt poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "VOLCANO" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 24 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/115281/volcano>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    7
    days
    7
    hours
    30
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The long poem “The Waste Land” was written by which poet?
    A C. S Lewis
    B Emma Lazarus
    C T. S. Eliot
    D W. H. Auden