Analysis of A Father's Love Never Leaves



when skies turned from blue to grey
and light had faded from the day
i turned and thought of (You).

when talks came
and anger framed
i turned and thought of (You).

(You), who i was once a part of
(You), who sang of cardinals and dove
into the abyss of marriage
i turned and thought of (You).

when time passed and seasons crept
while daughter cried and mother wept
i turned and thought of (You).

when father turned foe
and mother turned toe
i turned and thought of (You).

(You), who bore an evil mark
(You), who brought to mind thoughts of parks
and summers deep in joyous thought
i turned and thought of (You).

when years of hate and rage subside
i tried to find where (You) reside
i turned and thought of (You).

when (I) grew tired and weary of anger
when (I) decided to throw out the hanger
(I) turned and thought of (You).

(You), who spoke in a gentle tone
(You), who decided to pick up the phone
and listen to a war-torn voice
(I) turned to talk to (You).


Scheme aaB xxB ccxB ddB eeB xxxB ffB ggb hhxb
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Metre 1111111 01110101 110111 111 0101 110111 11111011 111110001 01001110 110111 1110101 11010101 110111 11011 01011 110111 1111101 11111111 01010101 110111 11110101 11111101 110111 11110010110 1110111010 110111 11100101 111011101 01010111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 969
Words 202
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on December 19, 2021

Submitted by abbymgregory on December 19, 2021

Modified on April 07, 2023

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